7/5 still pure awesome a decade latrer
7/5 still pure awesome a decade latrer
I thoroughly enjoyed this
Gotta be more confident in your singing man, try looking up some warming exercises and don't be afraid to be loud, otherwise you get sort of a timid sound
I like it, will check out your other work too. What I appreciate most is the quality of writing, it's more than just quality animation
Quite a visual treat, well done
Danks
the transition at the end made this turn from great to fuckin fantastic, great job you magnificent bastard
Put more time into it, animation isn't bad but not a whole lot happens either. Why is that character the lone warrior? what or who are they stopping to look at before continue their forlorn walk across the screen? where are they going? where did they come from? answer these questions with a story put it into frames to see how it turns out
Thank you for criticizing. Yes, there isn't a story; my next animations will definitely have those. This is in the experimental category for a reason. If I had posted this animation in the action, drama or comedy category, your points would be much stronger. I intend to create a story around this in the future. I just wanted to experiment and have some feedback on what they thought of the animation or something. Again, thank you for the criticism.
both a great in their own way, and a most excellent short you have got here
Pretty decent, the intro could use some sound effects(if anything lower the volume on them so it doesn't clash with the music) to give it a little more kick
Fun fact: most of my flash content was made when I was a dumb kid with untreated adhd, depression, ptsd, all that fun shit. Now I'm a dumb adult and making some steps toward less fucked up head and make some music. Main point is just be yourself and enjoy
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