Nail's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Watatrip]

Quite a visual treat, well done

SuperLaserBeamPanda responds:

Danks

[The Lone Warrior]

Put more time into it, animation isn't bad but not a whole lot happens either. Why is that character the lone warrior? what or who are they stopping to look at before continue their forlorn walk across the screen? where are they going? where did they come from? answer these questions with a story put it into frames to see how it turns out

Stylazy responds:

Thank you for criticizing. Yes, there isn't a story; my next animations will definitely have those. This is in the experimental category for a reason. If I had posted this animation in the action, drama or comedy category, your points would be much stronger. I intend to create a story around this in the future. I just wanted to experiment and have some feedback on what they thought of the animation or something. Again, thank you for the criticism.

[Super Mario- Hama Bead Stop Motion Animation]

That looked fantastic, you even made the character move in a way where I believed someone was controlling it. Good stuff, looking forward to your other works

TheDogtor responds:

Thanks so much! :D The controller part was actually something I really hoped came across in video, so glad that turned out right! ^-^

[Life after Pokemon GO]

Not too bad in terms of illustration/animation, but not a whole lot happens either

CKCreative responds:

Other than the intro animation this is my first attempt, and only having a headphone mic at the minute. Im using Flash MX to practice to then move to a better version at this point. however I do like to hear constructive criticism so thank you, taken on board :).

[[What-If] Dragon Ball: Gogeta confronts Beerus - Short Animation.]

I thought there would be an actual fight...anyway SSJ4 Gogeta would still go down in 1 hit. Again, I was under the assumption the fight would be animated but it is not

iHereditary responds:

Lol. There's no sheet for Super Saiyan 4 - Gogeta, so, couldn't do a fight. Also, I know Gogeta would get 1 shot. xDDD

[UDB: Marcuto vs Mamba]

Animation and effects look great, my input is maybe have some of the conversation at the beginning and less pauses in the middle of some very well done fighting scenes, either that or don't hesitate to have a little more action going on when a text box is displayed, also the text box noises gets old pretty fast so cutting down on that would also be a plus

Jozarto responds:

Thanks. I'll try to work on that. Would you suggest removing the textbox sound, or using it a lot less?

[Mario Question block Collab entry]

Not bad, not great either, could've had the block change after the explosion for a little conceptual continuity

KNamekian1 responds:

I could've but all the other ideas were taken so I just thought of something short

[If pokemons could speak English]

Definitely not bad for a first movie, the only downside is how short it is. With a few more scenes this would probably get an award or two

TheMartoon responds:

I didn't even expect anyone to see this haha but thank you! This was pretty much me getting used to flash but i'll keep trying to improve and make longer and better quality stuff.I literally make a newgrounds account today so don't know anything about award and stuff :P